「萬事開頭難」,寫好一篇作文,開頭段十分重要。特別係IELTS考試,想要攞高分,考官需要係你嘅第一段就能了解你呢篇作文的主要內容。我哋就黎教下大家,寫好作文第一段的「萬能公式」!記得要盡量寫得精確、簡潔呀!

 

通常第一段由四個句子組成:

  1. Background statement
  2. Detailed background
  3. Thesis
  4. Outline

 

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Example question:

Technology is becoming increasingly prevalent in the world today. Technology will completely replace the teacher in the classroom. Do you agree or disagree?

 

1. Background statement: 關於題目的基礎信息

 

In today’s world, the use of technology is ever-increasing.

 

2. Detailed background: 更多相關信息

 

Even in classrooms technology can be commonly seen.

 

3. Thesis: 你的觀點

 

It is disagreed that technology will entirely replace the teacher in the classroom.

 

4. Outline: 主要論據

 

Analyzing both the inability of a technology-driven teacher to discipline students as well as this robotic teacher’s hindrance to students’ learning process will show this.