IELTS Writing其實都要寫到比較學術嘅文章，同平日email或者message真喺有好大分別，又唔似speaking咁比較短就完一個題目，學術文嘅結構好重要，成篇文嘅脈絡都要清晰，驚自己寫得唔夠學術？咁不如一齊睇下3個要比多啲心力去注意嘅地方啦！
1. 要寫得夠客觀
(X) I want to share the importance of receiving university education.
我想分享接受大學教育的重要性。
(O) This essay will analyze the importance of tertiary education.
這篇文章會分析高等教育的重要性。
2. 要寫得夠formal
(X) 用emotive words : scary 可怕 / happy 開心
(X) 用太空泛的字 : good 好 / thing 東西
(X) 用縮寫 (contraction) : can’t 不可以 / didn’t 沒有
3. 結構/立場清晰
(O) 總分結構 : This essay will examine the relationship between parents and their children and how it is affecting the future of children from three different perspectives.
這篇文章會分析家長與其子女的關係，然後以三個角度解剖這是如何影響小孩的未來。
(O) 立場清晰 : To conclude, the limit of retirement age should be changed due to longer life expectancy.
總而言之，退休年齡的限制應有所變更，因為人均壽命提高了。
記得做好以上嘅3大點，IELTS嘅Academic writing就難你唔到啦！
