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As a matter of fact 事實上

As a matter of fact, going on a working holiday is an eye-opening experience.
事實上，去工作假期會是一個令人大開眼界的體驗。

 

Most important of all 最重要的是

Most important of all, giving blood is beneficial for both the donor and the receiver.
最重要的是，捐血是有益於捐贈者和接受者。

 

Without any questions 毫無疑問地

Without any questions, catching up with the trend in changing smartphone once a year, can be too luxurious for underprivileged families.
毫無疑問地，每年換一年智能手機以跟上潮流，對基層家庭而言是一件過分奢侈的事。

 

The chief characteristic 主要的特徵

The chief characteristic of young people who avoid social contact is that they push others away from their comfort zone.
嘗試避免社交的年輕人的主要特徵是，他們把其他人排除在自己的安全圈之外。

 

To some extent 在某程度上

To some extent, working in Shenzhen can allow people to attain a better quality of life, due to the lower cost of living and it being less crowded.
在某程度上，在深圳工作可以有更好的生活質素，如較低的生活支出和沒有那麼擁擠。

 

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